CaitlinGrant

Thanks for all the reviews and good points, they really helped! :D oh, and the ~~~ is my version of a chapter break.

yeah there's a sequel :P

Thanks. :D Unfortunately my parents want me to stop posting the story, so that's why I posted the end for those who really wanted to know what happened.

Oh, okay then :P well good job on the story, i'm liking it so far

thanks :D yeah, i was wondering about using the word bastard too... do u have any suggestions to replace it with? i still kind of want to keep the emotion ...

lol thanks. Actually, I do have a plan... unfortunately, it's top secret :D not even my sister, who's constantly peppering me for by the hour updates, knows the truth. :elephant:

thanks for the reviews, guys :elephant: And don't worry, Ash and Liz will meet again in a year... or two. I can't say any more. I hope it'll be about ...

thanks guys! I just jotted this down quickly so I wouldn't forget it, so I won't put up more chapters for a while... right now I'm working on the other ...

oh.... *!* It makes so much sense now! lol. hm, i'm not sure how you could make the fact that it's ice cream clear... u can probably just say it: ...

hm... well, since you asked for suggestions, let me see what i can do... keep in mind, this is all nit-picking, since there really isn't anything major. :D The priest’s ...

Thanks so much :D I will, hopefully. Finals are coming up though, so... I'll try!

thanks, that's a really good point. I'll work on it!

lol, don't worry. Unfortunately, I can't tell you whats going to happen, or that would ruin the story. But you'll see Liz again, granted not for a while. :xd: my ...

lol some else mentioned that too. no, Ash is a boy. Liz is a girl, and Liz is short for Charlize.