CaitlinGrant

Hey :D I really liked the fact that this piece was short, to the point, and fulfilling. In that short text you managed to give us a character with emotions, ...

Hi, Caitlin here to review! I'll start with nitpicks. The weekend zoomed by like cars on the freeway. A blur, most of that was probably because my head was a ...

Hi, it's Caitlin :D It's been a long time since I was on YWS, and I just came back to see your message about you liking my reviews, so I ...

Hi Jon, It's Caitlin :D First off, I'd like to say that I really like the simplicity of this poem. Somehow that makes it truly beautiful, and I can see ...

I really like this--though the language is simplistic and clear, you convey all your emotions really well throughout the entire piece. Also, I think that your selection of certain scenes ...

So. As usual, I absolutely loved this. :wink: I guess I'll do some nitpicking for you to start, huh? “Have a shower,” Take a shower, you mean. Staring at the ...

hi. to start, i want to give you positive feedback: you do really well describing things so that we can really imagine it without dumping a ton of info on ...

Hi :P So, let me see what I can do to help you. Before I go into a long critique or whatever, I want to say that I liked this. ...

Hey, i read your post on the chatwall. I'm Caitlin, nice to meet you. Now for the nit-picking! As she slid the cold metal across her skin, tears streamed down ...

i found this story today and read every chapter you've put up. I LOVE IT! Honestly, this is the best story I've read on YWS. I think it's probably because ...

Hey high maria! Well, first of all, welcome to YWS. You probably don't know this, but you're supposed to review three works before submitting your own (this makes sure everyone ...

Hey, this is Caitlin. I'm just nit picking here, so bear with me. The crimson substance splashed on the pavement, exploding in all directions. Guilty stopped and looked down, eyes ...

Hey, This is Caitlin! Let me start out by saying you did a really good job with this: I could feel myself as a young, confused girl who doesn't want ...

Hey, it's Caitlin Grant. This story isn't the normal thing i read, but it's definitely something that caught my attention from the beginning. Your characters are well developed--they seem to ...

hey, it's Caitlin Grant. This story really pulled me in from the beginning, when she was at the graveyard, because it brought up a lot of questions, and my interest ...