CaitlinGrant

lol, don't worry. Unfortunately, I can't tell you whats going to happen, or that would ruin the story. But you'll see Liz again, granted not for a while. :xd: my ...

Hey! I know this chapter is pretty long, but it's a pivotal one too, so I wanted to put it all together. I'll be really busy with finals though, so ...

Hey! I like this story, and i think it has a lot of potential. At some parts, though, it's confusing. for example, you mention Andrew in the first sentence, and ...

lol some else mentioned that too. no, Ash is a boy. Liz is a girl, and Liz is short for Charlize.

I really like this tory. it's deep, and the emotion of the main character is very well portrayed. I especially think you did a good job portraying the fear and ...

To start off, I really like this work. Some things would probably make it flow better, though: First of all, spell check. it's a really small thing, but it does ...

Thanks for the reviews! Last Chapter: She leaned into my hand and closed her eyes for a moment before we both made our way back to the bedrolls. We sat ...

wow. I really liked this, because it's powerful and moving. I like your style of writing, especially in this lyrical form, but I also read your other post, i think ...

Read chapter one first, obviously. Read and review! :D He looked winningly at us and Liz snarled at him, unable to say anything. The panic was threatening to overwhelm me, ...

Wow. I loved this. To start off, it's full of mystery and intrigue. Wood, steel and stone: somehow the way you worded that made it very deep. Also, though your ...

I definitely liked it, and it totally captivated me. You have a great hook right from the beginning that makes people want to read more, and when you tell and ...

The description in this story is very good-- it's vivid and strong and I can imagine the scene unfolding in my mind's eye. The tension and suspense are good, just ...

Wow. Really. Just...wow. That was really beautiful, and very deep. I love the way you describe everything smoothly, and give the world around you a personailty. It really adds to ...

I've edited this, so now it's less of a chapter and more of a prologue. :D Thanks to those who reviewed! It's funny, how one day you can be the ...

Hey! I like the way your story leaves us wondering what happened, and what is going to happen. you did a really good job with that. My suggestion would be ...