CaitlinGrant

Layla had always been loved. Though she never married, never even got into a relationship, she had the hearts of two men—both completely different from each other. While she was ...

I really like this--though the language is simplistic and clear, you convey all your emotions really well throughout the entire piece. Also, I think that your selection of certain scenes ...

When I think of my childhood, I think of mayhem. My dad is someone who I barely remember: he had a smile that was always described as ‘charming’ by everyone ...

This is the first time I've ever written poetry, so I wanted to put it up here to see what people thought. Please, I'd love reviews. and if you want ...

So. As usual, I absolutely loved this. :wink: I guess I'll do some nitpicking for you to start, huh? “Have a shower,” Take a shower, you mean. Staring at the ...

yeah there's a sequel :P

Thanks. :D Unfortunately my parents want me to stop posting the story, so that's why I posted the end for those who really wanted to know what happened.

All right, this post is for Pretty Crazy and Chirantha, for staying with me. Like I said,I can't post the whole story, but this is the end, because I know ...

hi. to start, i want to give you positive feedback: you do really well describing things so that we can really imagine it without dumping a ton of info on ...

Hey Daydreams! I really hope you like YWS, because it's a lot of fun once you learn how to use it (for someone as Tech challenged as me, that might ...

Oh, okay then :P well good job on the story, i'm liking it so far

Hi :P So, let me see what I can do to help you. Before I go into a long critique or whatever, I want to say that I liked this. ...

Happy New Years everyone! :elephant: The next morning when Mackenzie ‘woke me up’ I was gritty eyed and grumpy. I had probably slept a total of five minutes the whole ...

thanks :D yeah, i was wondering about using the word bastard too... do u have any suggestions to replace it with? i still kind of want to keep the emotion ...

Merry Christmas! Reviews much appreciated :D Just then I realized I had no place to stay, and I looked uncomfortably around, wondering if there was a place I could stay ...