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Re: Feed The Pink Elephant! [Open!]
Can you *pretty pretty please with a cherry or five on top* review the novel I've started working on, Hide and Seek? It's action adventure: Thanks so much!!!!
Jan 22, 2011 -
Re: Hide and Seek Ch. 3
A week passed fast: Sometimes Nico and I would be left by ourselves for a whole day, others I’d be taken out and questioned for hours on end. Neither of ...
Jan 11, 2011 -
Re: Fury
Hey :D I really liked the fact that this piece was short, to the point, and fulfilling. In that short text you managed to give us a character with emotions, ...
Jan 11, 2011 -
Re: Hide and Seek Ch. 2 *some bad language*
We were silent for a few seconds, and then Nico looked over at me. “Tell me about yourself.” “Why? So you can figure out how best to fit me conveniently ...
Dec 27, 2010 -
Re: Hide and Seek Ch. 1
Thanks for all the reviews and good points, they really helped! :D oh, and the ~~~ is my version of a chapter break.
Dec 23, 2010 -
Re: Hide and Seek Ch. 1
In the silence of the tiny, bare room, the sound of my pulsing heart seemed to grow louder, swallowing up everything else. My sweaty palms gripped the sides of the ...
Dec 22, 2010 -
Re: Fighters Promise, Ch 6
Blade POV Caitlin dropped Max and me off a block away from Dave’s place, and then we walked the rest of the way. He had a tiny, crummy apartment where ...
Dec 12, 2010 -
Re: Fighters Promise, Ch. 5
Two days later Zach, Angel and Blade were settled in. Blade had a room right next to mine and Zach had taken the one next to his. Angel slept down ...
Nov 7, 2010 -
Re: Fighters Promise, Ch. 4
I know this is moving slowly, but the story will be picking up soon! Thanks for sticking with me! The next two months passed faster than I’d have ever thought ...
Oct 9, 2010 -
Re: Taboo [12]
Hi, Caitlin here to review! I'll start with nitpicks. The weekend zoomed by like cars on the freeway. A blur, most of that was probably because my head was a ...
Oct 9, 2010 -
Re: Fighters Promise, Ch 3
Hi! I made this chapter extra-extra long because I've totally been slacking off, and I felt really bad. So, borntobeawriter, here you go! :) Things will be getting more interesting ...
Oct 3, 2010 -
Re: Fighters Promise, Ch 2
Hello all, chapter two is up! for further reference, the Bitch is now called the Queen Bee or Bee. I haven't changed it the YWS upload of ch. 1, but ...
Sep 18, 2010 -
Re: Death and His Apprentice
Hi, it's Caitlin :D It's been a long time since I was on YWS, and I just came back to see your message about you liking my reviews, so I ...
Sep 15, 2010 -
Re: Fighters Promise, Ch 1
*12+ for one minor swear word* Hey everyone, I'm glad to be getting back into YWS, and I'd love any reviews or comments. Also, if you want me to review ...
Sep 14, 2010 -
Re: Sparkling
Hi Jon, It's Caitlin :D First off, I'd like to say that I really like the simplicity of this poem. Somehow that makes it truly beautiful, and I can see ...
Sep 14, 2010
