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Re: Real or not?
That was awesome, I felt like you had someone watched my life and then changed the characters and names and written a script about it. :) Seriously, my characters talk ...
Jul 19, 2011 -
Re: My Ocean
I try to see past the ocean of dread that has begun to slowly drown out all else. Waves of misery continue to crash against the rocks that are my ...
Jul 19, 2011 -
Re: Hero of the Night
For a school project we had to write a story about one of the third graders who went to the school. I got a little carried away with my story ...
Jul 19, 2011 -
Re: Fallen from Grace
Wow! I really liked this, it was so short, but so packed with emotion. I could see her crying, and drifting away. It was just really good. I don't have ...
Jul 18, 2011 -
Re: Possessing Maya
Hey, this was great! I wasn't going to read it if it was long, but I couldn't help reading the first paragraph anyway. It drew me in and I couldn't ...
Jul 18, 2011 -
Re: Who Knew?
Just want to say that I really liked this. It's packed with emotion and feeling. I especially love the short sentences, they really add to the poem. I don't have ...
Jul 18, 2011 -
Re: Bury me, Bury me (prologue) --thriller/horror
I really found this interesting. It definitely drew me in. :) You didn't give very much information, like Joshua Paul said you didn't reallly say anything about "it". However, I ...
Jul 18, 2011 -
Re: Reality
Wow! I loved this, it was worded so perfectly and I could relate to it so much. The only comment I have is your line, I turned and ran, but ...
Jul 18, 2011 -
Re: Bad Jokes
This was good, and I must say it also freaked me out. When I saw the title and read the first few sentences I thought the lady was going to ...
Jul 17, 2011 -
Re: the key to my heart. ♥
I liked this, it's super cute and romantice and made me want a guy to curl up with. ;) My head started pounding and my blood boiled. I didn't care ...
Jul 17, 2011 -
Re: God
"God!" I called into the night, "God!" My voice shook, my eyelashes still dripped with falling tears. "God!" My heart had fallen apart; I couldn't see the pieces, they were ...
Jul 17, 2011 -
Re: Addicted
That was cool, and very emotional. You definitely caught the idea of this guy being addicted. :) I'm being held togetherby a fragile string of hope... I think these were ...
Jul 14, 2011 -
Re: A bandits fortune
Wow! This was great. Sorry my review will be no good, but I just fell like I had to say something about this. :) It was good! It kind of ...
Jul 13, 2011 -
Re: Dear Lucy: Chapter One
That was good. I liked it and it caught my attention. I know you wanted a review, but I don't have too much to say. It was well written and ...
Jul 12, 2011 -
Re: Perfect world
It's life's at an end. I don't know what you meant by that exactly. Should it be it's life at an end? On a web so thin, Hangs an elephant ...
Jul 12, 2011
