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I was thinking about Christianity, and how the greatest commands are to love God, love yourself and love others. Jesus also said that we would be hated by the world ...

I don't know how to review art, so I have nothing helpful to say... But I thought this were great. I especially liked the last one, and now I am ...

Granted, but you spend so much time controling them that you become a computer. I wish school would start soon.

This poem was short, sweet and sad. I liked it, and just have a few comments. First of all, I couldn't tell if this was supposed to rhyme. If so, ...

No, it was good. And feel free to post as much as you like. I'm sorry if my review was harsh... Seriously though, keep writing, and when people tell you ...

That really was a short story. Yet, in that one paragraph you succesfully described the character's personality and attitude, you gave the setting and you even added some extra details. ...

This was good, I like how you didn't start out immediately with Harry Potter. If you had, I probably wouldn't have read it, I'm getting tired of everyone writing about ...

I couldn't figure out how to switch this to a better formatting, sorry. I got the idea for this after driving past a sign that said "We sell memory". The ...

That was good, it had a lot of questions. :) I agree with Shakyll, I loved the inch by inch by inch. I thought the line that just said "they" ...

Hey, this is a good first chapter, you did a good job at getting me interested. June in India is blistering, ominous month. I think you mean, is a blistering, ...

I like rhyming, I'm different from all these other YWSers who dislike rhymes. However, I agree completely with Hannah. You need to be in control of your poem. While reading ...

I liked this! In the first stanza scary and weary don't rhyme very well, so if you can think of a way to change that, it might sound better. But, ...

This was great! I loved it, and only found one nitpick: Pointless repetitions beat, endless drums beat to insane. I think it would work better if you didn't have the ...

They think it's sexy, I agree, I guess. It's our nice game where you tie me to you Try fixing this so that you don't have you used twice so ...

Before my review, I see you are new to YWS. Welcome! I hope you enjoy the site as much as I have. :D First comment: I think you should find ...