Cailey

This was great!! It was very exciting and brought back my desire to watch a Harry Potter movie or read the books. :) Also, I loved the character. She was ...

I could relate, it was very good topic and well expressed. That you Has changed things Between you and me You has changed things? Do you mean, you have? Also, ...

Hey, so this was pretty good... but you NEED TO EDIT!! I'm sorry, but it drove me crazy seeing you type lowercase i's. I should always be capitalized! There were ...

I agree, don't change the title!! Your title is what inspired me to read this in the first place. :) When I read this, I somehow missed the third grade ...

This was good, I don't have too much of a critique. I didn't notice any grammar or spelling mistakes. I liked the added parenthesis, they added a cool feel to ...

9 I will give your kangaroo medicine to make him puke up the gun. Oops, my giraffe ate all the medicine and it now dying. :(

I wasn't going to read this, but I read the title, and I have no sense, so I had to read it. :) It was amusing, so I'm hoping it ...

Yeah, I got glasses, Go ahead, Call me four-eyes; I dare you. What's on my teeth? Oh, okay You're going to Say brace-face, too? My inhaler means nothing; I'm just ...

I want to hit something. No, someone. I want to feel flesh. I want to give him the pain that I have to deal with every day. I want to ...

I love you more than anything is this world. The is should be in. :) Just thought I would point that out since no one else seemed to notice... :D ...

So, I wish I could give a more helpful review, but I didn't see anything wrong. Although, it did seem weird that you had no punctuation in the first stanza, ...

Hey, this was really good. I especially liked when you compared the tire to a donut. :) It reminded me of a time when a guy came up to my ...

I agree, this was cute. :) There are places where your rhyming doesn't rhyme... so you should try and find some better rhymes. And yes, punctuation would be nice... I ...

So, I read the first part, and didn't scroll down enough to see the last part. And I was so sad that it was done so soon! I wanted more! ...

Sorry, I decided to take this down.