Cailey

I saw a poem today. My eyes wondered to the window, I saw an old man. His back was bent, the hair he had left was grey and thin, he ...

So, first off this is a great poem. It's an interesting idea, and I liked how in the end the mind won. I just have a few nitpicks now. My ...

This is really good! You are the one who, you think, I'm worried about; Can't you see that I'm scared, For me... I'm just a little confused here. I don't ...

Now that I read this, I have the urge to go look in the mirror. And at the same time, I'm afraid of doing so. :) This poem had a ...

The words I craft I feel like there is something missing here. Maybe some type of punctuation? drip, distastefully, from your lips Great line! And onto the floor I think ...

I have no reviewing to do, it seems you already got some good reviews. Besides, I was so enraptured by the poem that I had no time to concentrate on ...

Wow, this was hilarious. Your diction was so serious and matter-of-fact the whole time, which was awesome! It was so pointless and ridiculous and strange. :D My favorite line was ...

I have to admit, I agree with the comment above mine. This confused me so much! I actually wasn't even sure if this was supposed to be a love poem. ...

Jogging in place In a never ending race I liked these two lines, they were great! Always moving I feel like punctuation would be nice. It just makes it easier ...

Wow! I am so interested! What happened? Did she die or not? Keep writing on this, please! It would be great! And if you do, let me know so that ...

You dream, I don't quite understand how this line fits with the rest of the stanza. Did his dream have something to do with the dust? Dust motes partaking, In ...

Hey, this was great, I did notice a few mistakes while I was reading, but now I can't find them again... :D Sorry. I really don't have a good review ...

I've let you hold my heart in your hands you've squeezed, and squeezed This was my favorite two lines... but I'm also wondering why You've isn't capitalized. All the other ...

I don't have a review, but I had to say something! This was interesting and exciting. I just wanted to say good job. :)

Wow, this was amazing. It was so sweet, and had a lot of emotion. The short stanzas and lines made me feel like I was losing the words, and since ...