Cailey

'He loves her' And 'He loves him,' Don't you see? So, yeah, do you mean She loves him? Because the ending kind of blew up the whole poem. I just ...

So, I still am not sure what happened to the person you're talking to. Did he/she die? Or you mention love, was the narrarator someone who just got dumped? Anyway, ...

Luna Rose Perez I rolled over and suddenly found a bush in my face. Jumping upright, I tried to look around. Where was I? Definitely not in my plain room ...

yes, I want to start!

This was very short, sad, and yet filled with hope. I don't have a real review, although in some places your lines seemed too long. Either that or they were ...

Yes, agreed, I want to start! :D

So, I spent a lot of time on this poem, trying to make it really good. Now that I'm satisfied with it, please go ahead and destroy it in your ...

Granted, but now it will never come undone and you will never get that accomplished feeling of having solved it. I wish I had a huge scoop of cookie dough ...

Name: Luna Rose Perez Age: 16 Appearance: Long black hair, almond shaped brown eyes, a slightly crooked smile with perfect teeth, skinny, not super short but not tall, tan skin. ...

Woah! I was expecting a totally different poem from reading the title. And I had to read the poem twice because it was awesome, and completely unexpected. There were a ...

No clue what was running through my mind when I wrote this... "We're criminals now." "It isn't our fault." "Maybe." "He fell!" "You pushed him." "What do we do?" "Nothing." ...

The road stretched on like a slithering snake. It was a road made of brown dirt, packed down by years of trudging feet. Along the sides of the road bluish ...

Well, now I'm confused, because when I read this it all made perfect sense. Then I saw it was suposed to be confusing.... Now I'm wondering why I understood it. ...

Awe! This was so good, I loved it! I didn't notice any mistakes, so great job! Sorry, I know I'm not saying anything, and I'm probably wasting your time by ...

I started writing this for the past blast contest, but as soon as I finished I hated it. :) So, if any one has any good advice on how to ...