Cailey

So, you have many reviews, and I will probably just be repeating earlier comments. Anyway, this is a very good piece. I liked the emotion, the feeling, the description, the ...

This was really interesting, I especially liked the beginning. All your questions and comments about the end of the world and people labeled as crazy. It made the narrator sound... ...

Oh! I liked this a lot! It was so sweet and romantic, and yes, cliche at times, but that isn't all bad. :) It fit the picture, it gave me ...

Will you review, please? :)

I just really felt like this was missing punctuation and capitalization. I know it's a poem and doesn't need that, but I find it distracting. Could you maybe, possibly add ...

Good job, now this deserves to be featured. All I have to say, is this was beautiful, and you do have God's grace. :)

So, this piece isn't terrible, and if I knew the story I bet it would even be funny. But... as it is, I am wondering why in the world this ...

Long ago, I was alone, bothered only by an unending silence. I loved the quiet, the peacefulness, the solitary pleasure of life. It was as if there was nothing I ...

Like it, but I feel like there were places where the rhythm was messed up. Of course, I was reading it as a poem, not a song, and I am ...

(Wait, did Abby find something or did you mean Luna?)

I'm not sure if this is really narrative poetry. So, sorry if I posted this wrong. Anyway, this is based on Ephesians 6:10-18. I really am ready for a revolution, ...

Well, I loved the idea, and yes, I am too young for love, even if I'm realizing a little late. :( Already been mentioned, I know, but you have so ...

Amazing!! This poem is wonderful, I have absolutely no nitpicks. It all flowed well, it made sense, it had enough emotion, enough imagery. It was just, brilliant, wonderful. Great job!!

So, in a few places it felt awkwardly worded, like your commas were in the wrong place or something. Anyway, I loved the idea and the descriptions and all. Good ...

First, I like the title, although it might be too dark for this particular poem. But... I don't know... ignore me... You always loved her She was always your favorite ...