Cailey

So, this was interesting, and short. I think overall you could have made it longer, added more detail, more imagery. Make the readers feel what you are feeling, see what ...

Well, I must say I disagree with the overall message of the poem. I believe true love does exist and is not a fail. However, especially in today's society there ...

everything was a game all you said was a lie I really wish you would add some punctuation. But, I like these two lines, they are connected, almost repetitive, but ...

Ok, so before anything, hey! :D I really like this poem, it's nice to read questions that can't really be answered. Really, I love how you put this. It's great. ...

Love it! Very good poem, very good imagery, just overall very good. :) Now, to my review! Life comes in every shade of green, In the tones of saphire blue ...

hush, now, here come the inklings! lightening bugs on soft green branches bloom again when springtime brinkings Brinkings?? No clue what that means. touch our futures, ask our answers-- watch ...

Panic, says my mind. Stay calm, I whisper back. You could use quotation marks here, don't have to, but you could. Even though I know the signs, I'm still numb ...

I am just superior to you, There’s nothing I can do. You’re just inferior to me, As anyone can easily see. Vdery good first stanza, you jump right out telling ...

Surely you know, dear, that words sometimes fail me; It's weird to end your line with that. I feel like it would sound better if you lowered that to the ...

Before anything, I hope I am not just repeating the previous reviews. Sorry, I didn't want to take the time to read them, I'm trying to get in as many ...

You said to rip this up, so I will try, even though I'm not great at ripping. Bear with me, ok? And, by the way, you succeeded with being confusing, ...

Hajaha! That was pretty hilarious, I have to admit, even though there is definitely nothing hilarious about periods. But still, you did an amazing job at catching the emotions and ...

Well, I am not convinced... I still don't quite understand what this is about? I thought it was just about someone climbing, but the rumble and thunk made it sound ...

I used to look, But I never saw. Reflections Were the only answer To my questioning. Day after day I searched, My eyes sought The mirror. All I saw, The ...

Just have to say this was a great poem. :) You are very talented. I was too absorbed in the poem (and am too tired) to find any nitpicks, and ...