Cailey

this is very well written. I love the emotion put into this. the feeling you've expressed. the sorrow that lingers even now. I really don't have much of a review. ...

Like it! And Biome is a word, I just learned it in Biology. :) Anyway, I loved the repetition. It was a very good poem, and felt.. refreshing? Not sure ...

I'm hurt i don't want this pain Before anything, why in the world are your I's not capitalized??? that just took away from the whole poem and was soooo distracting! ...

Wow! Very dark and creepy! Was this a real nightmare? I have a few nitpicks, but not much. First, you wrote there where you should have had their. And you ...

Luna Foragers. I hadn't been thinking when I offered to take charge of a group. I couldn't even talk to strangers, now I was leading a group of them? Just ...

this was inveresting. I like it. But, you NEED paragraphs! It's really hard to read a huge chunk of writing like this. It just makes the story so much better ...

this was great. I can't think of much of a review to give you. It was already simple enough. You had good rhyming, your rhythm was good (although there were ...

Woah. this is great. I am wondering about the story behind this. But I like that you don't tell everything. You leave it up to the reader to figure out ...

September 16 is coming up, Mexico's Independence. So, this is in honor of that day. :) “Revolución!” the cry rose among the people in an eerie chant, which grew louder ...

So, this was good, but I think you should work on the flow. It felt too broken up, too fragmented. Your stanzas all felt incomplete, like you ended them too ...

Fear- a part of life the cold blade of a knife a gun pointed to your eye the unreachable sky a desperate call for help one lost and lonely yelp. ...

Before anyThing I need To apologize for my capiTal Ts. My key is broken, and The only way I can geT a T is if I copy and pasTe one. ...

I really liked it. Great metaphors and desriptions. I noticed one or two typos, but I'm sure someone else has already pointed them out. Anyway, I had to let you ...

I really liked this, but it didn't feel all that poetic to me. the first stanza did, and the second was okay. However, all in all, it felt like prose ...

Wow, this is great. However, in the first part you said, "not the figurative kind," however, the second paragraph it sounds like you are only talking about the figurative kind. ...