Cailey

Good job, I have one comment. Here: "The song whispers along my fingers, Never stirring from their journey." It isn't clear if your second line is referring to the song ...

I liked your song! Good lyrics, although it sounded like it was okay to hate any other week. Anyway, here's a similar song, also very old. :D

thanks for the reviews and differing opinions. :)

So, I think this could use more. Detail, Imagery, metaphors, all those literary terms you learn in English class. Make us feel your heart. I do, but most likely it's ...

this was good, I liked your parrallel structure. they made the whole thing better somehow. :D they way each stanza was set up exactly the same. And it flowed well, ...

Yeah, as I Christian I'm not sure I like this. It was very well written, and I admire your effort. I wouldn't say this is offensive, I just don't completely ...

I had to read this twice, it didn't make sense the first time. After the second, I think I understand. the girl abandoned him too, right? It was a sad ...

The rose’s thorns Prick my finger Almost as much As their giver Pricked my heart I hear his words A hateful echo Repeated again Every sound From the first “I ...

Untouchable- taylor Swift

caqiley ok, so besides the q I did pretty good. :D

Hard question. I was born in the us. So, I've got the american, mixed up blood from all over the place. German, English, Irish, you name it. But, I live ...

I love it! this was so sweet and simple and true. I especially love your ending. there is an ending for you. It was so cool, and inspiring in a ...

Good job! I have a few comments on this, but for the most part it is a very well done piece of work. I can't wait until this song is ...

Hilarious!! :) I agree, post on youtube!! :D

I was going to put this in romance, but I don't know if it fits. So, here it is. Sorry about all the Spanish stuck in this story. But, it's ...