Cailey

this was very emotional and sad, good job. I think it lacks some description and detail, right now it's more just raw emotion. But I like it, you said everything ...

Wow, I have no review. this is really sad and sweet and well written. No mistakes that I caught. I just had to say something.

Wow, this is pretty cool. You have a great feel throughout the whole poem. I love it. Your rhythm isn't very smooth, but if you did it to match the ...

I’m from everywhere and from nowhere. I’m from the smell of vanilla pines, the vibrant blues of the sky, the minty aroma of sage in the air, the crunch of ...

Alright! Sounds awesome, post soon guys, and then we can get started. :)

I'd say let's see if we can get one or two more people and then we can start. :)

Lovely poem. A few comments, hopefully not already mentioned. I think it's supposed to be themselves instead of theirselves. It sounds better to me anyway. I'm not 100% sure, but ...

I really don't have much of a review. this was cool, I especially loved the last stanza and the comparison to diamonds. Good detail. I have to say though, I ...

Dear you, I wish I knew you. I wish I could guess what thoughts where spinning through your head as you read this letter. A letter to you. You, who ...

First thing I noticed, aren't predictable and extraordinary opposites? It doesn't seem like they fit together on that line. I like the idea of this poem, the theme and all, ...

Wow, this was really good. I liked how you made all the colors fit into life and all. If that makes sense. At first I thought your tone was too ...

Yeah, I vote for beginning of the tournament. Also, I don't mind if my character dies off pretty quickly, though not in the cornucopia bloodbath. Still, I will volunteer to ...

Cesar Flickerman. :) And, I agree it would be kind of confusing to get the whole inverview and all. But when you're in the arena your character can always have ...

Name: Alek Martoll Age: 13 District: 11 Appearance: Dark skin, short curly black hair, deep brown eyes. tall, but skinny and clumsy. History: He has a younger brother, Sam, who ...

Hey, I have posted the rest of this story! Please read all of it, the story is better if it's all together. Click on the view novel page and you ...