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Lamika At the very beginning of the fight Lamika had shot the first arrow and killed the first enemy. Yet now all she could do was watch from her concealed ...

Lamika the quiet conversation between Haven and Lamika was shattered instantly. Lamika lept to her feet and had her bow ready before Haven had even caught the meaning of Pelleas' ...

yes, PM me when you have the rest, please?

(on an unrelated note, we should try and all write third person, since it's a bit distracting to have some in third and some in first person. So, if you ...

Lamika Lamika did not fail to see the cheek that rolled down Haven's cheek. Nor did she notice the t on his arm. Quickly Haven changed the subject, switching to ...

Lamika Lamika couldn't stop the heat that rushed into her face when Haven spoke to her. His voice had a hint of wildness, like the lion he was, but it ...

well, you didn't mention anything you wouldn't review besides novels and scripts, so I take it you don't mind reviewing romance? Anyway, if you have time I'd like some reviews ...

I like this, especially the way you hint at the fact that the princess was already beginning to fall in love with the prince even when he was a frog. ...

I really like this, and it has an amazing message. I agree completely, and I love how you could be talking about anything. I mean, this poem could be telling ...

I'm thinking of maybe entering this in a contest, so let me know your thoughts. Do I make you sigh and dream of your guy/girl? I know I'm only fifteen, ...

Lamika I pushed back a strand of hair and watched the preparations going on around me. Jenko was off gathering firewood, keeping an eye out for Firego and I. All ...

Yes, we can begin!! Woot woot! Ok, well you can go ahead and play Firego then. And, if you like you can write this first post too. :)

Ok, and if she doesn't I don't mind playing one. So, Leahweird, let me know if you want to take him or want me to. then we can begin.

Hopefully this counts as narrative! :) Anyway, in US history we've reached the infamous section about slavery. I know this poem doesn't even begin to cover the horrors of slavery, ...

Here I am for the review! :D First off, I think you could come up with a more creative title. I'm awful at titles, but this one didn't really grab ...