Cailey

Woah! Well, I read you say it was dark and that's why it wasn't under romance. But I wasn't convinced until I started reading. :) So great job on the ...

thanks for the reviews, I did go back and fix the stuff you pointed out. Glad you liked it!!

Lamika As soon as the group reached Blackmire she began to feel nervous. Something was strangely mysterious about this place. Hopefully they would be able to eat and discuss their ...

Lamika Haven's apology caught her off gaurd. She had thought that she had done well hiding the horror she felt when she saw Haven transform into this thing he called ...

The fingers of wind were cold and desperate; their touch was that of dry ice pulling, dragging, begging. Passion of the sightless wind could not be seen, but oh, it ...

Lamika Are we really that bad? Just my little attempt at finding out what was wrong caused him to disappear? Lamika's thoughts were strangely dark and upset. She tried to ...

this is good, but there are some spelling mistakes and a few places that are worded awkwardly. I really like the overall idea of the poem, and the way you ...

Lamika Lamika woke up screaming, only to see Firego's smiling face above her. She hated being tickled, it made her feel so childish. She slapped Firego without hesitating, but immediately ...

Lovely! the last line made me laugh, thinking that all this was just parts of an atom. I was seriously expecting a different ending. But I liked yours. You captured ...

Wow! I love this, absolutely! there is so much emotion here and I can put myself in this situation. It's very well written, and it's just, well it's good. As ...

this is really sad, although it does kind of bug me, why does it have to be the end? I mean, it's possibly to keep a long distance relationship. Hard, ...

this is pretty funny and cute. :) I like it as a poem and I'm sure it's even better as a song. there isn't much to review, I didn't catch ...

I liked all the cliche! Really, it was a sweet poem, easy to identify with. I think you may have had too much punctuation that wasn't needed. So, you may ...

Lamika Lamika awoke in a quiet tent feeling sore and tired. After a few minutes where the world spun dizzyingly she was able to focus on Firego's concerned face staring ...

I must say I love the poem and the idea behind it. My only nitpick is the rhythm, in several places it felt like you were focusing mostly on the ...