Cailey

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Lamika She opened her eyes to the sight of Firego. He was smiling, but seemed distracted at the same time. "Haven," she murmured, feeling a sticky mess running down her ...

Izley- Second Period I was later than I thought. Five minutes of class and I was being shoved back to the hallway for my elements class. I walked in and ...

Ah!!! I just wrote a whole reply and then my computer froze and it got erased!!!!!! Arg!! I hate stupid computers!!! Sorry. Temper tantrum. Izley- On the way to first ...

Hm, this sounds interesting. I don't know for sure if I can, knowing myself I'll forget and miss it... but.... sign me up anyway and I'll try to remember!

So, I've had this idea for a romance... but could never actually get anything written. I think a partner would help. So, basically, what I have is a girl named ...

Hm, I was going to change something in mine... but I can't remember what now. Oh well. Also, if you don't get enough people I wouldn't mind taking a second ...

Lamika Lamika had woken in Haven's arms, with her head gently laid on his shoulder. Even after she woke, the werelion refused to set her down. She noticed the way ...

Name/nickname: Izley Drark Power: She has the power to control ice and to turn liquid into ice. She can even do this with blood, though for obvious reasons she is ...

Before anything, I don't really agree with this. I think God is loving and caring, and yes, He can choose our death and birth, but it's not selfishness, it's part ...

As for actual editting, you just need to read over this a few more times. Make it flow, and fix a few typos in there. However, if you don't mind ...

Hey, so here's my little bit of advice. It's actually been forever since I've reviewed anything, but anyway, here goes. First I'll let you know what I disliked. For one, ...

Fortunately, a bird flies by and distracts the tree.

romance

“Crucify him!” the cries ran out from the crowd. There was a hint of desperation in the screaming voices, as if they feared that prolonging the death would end by ...