Cabassi_Crime_Family

Err, this is sort of a Grand Re-Opening. The CCF are back in business for sure and we promise that as soon as your message meets our eyes we will ...

Ciao OE. Mi dispiace --or sorry, simply--for the time it took to get to this. There is something catchy, short and blunt, in the final two lines. It seems an ...

Ciao. Yes, cliche--but then, you've a somewhat rundown subject --threadbare sort of story in how oft it slips into poetry. In itself, there's naught fatal about that, naturally. But it ...

Not nice! *takes kitten back and pets it* Watch out SPEW, or CCF shall be forced to slay you!

Hello! :) I stand alone In this huge field. I’m surrounded by grass Lush and perfectly green. **This is rather boring. Lush and perfectly green is what we expect grass ...

This critique has been brought to you by the CCF and the contribution of Saint Razorblade. Chapter Five: The Council of Chiren “State your name.” the Councilwoman says, her voice ...

We shall see dear Saint, we shall see. You're lucky it's the holiday season. *shakes fist*

Good day YWS. As we know it is deep into the holiday season and for a limited time the CCF will be offering hardcore very in-depth critiques for just 10 ...

Ello, Electric Oceans, Maria, Church, Kodi, and all other new members!:) Welcome to YWS! If you have any questions or need any reiviews just PM me. :) ~CCF~

Daniel stood, wiping down the bar with a damp cloth. He whistled the tune of an old song as he did. Its name wouldn’t come to mind, but it was ...

Chapter one “Flowers for my Seelie queen.” Warrick, king of the Seelie court, said, handing over a bouquet of the rare blue rose. **Perhaps have him say this a little ...

Saint Razorblade- I wish I had more time to read this. I read the second half, and only scanned the first. I really like it though. Your characters seem to ...

Chapter 1 - An Apprentice in Raile Mancery: The art of drawing eldritch from the winds of magic and manipulating it to one’s own uses. The craftsmen and women of ...

Senz'altro, ragazzo--siamo in ritardo, qualche volte perche, dio mio, la vita e pazza. ^_~ In other words, very much in business if slightly delayed by various ventures vaguely out of ...

Blood on Snow “Damn you, Shay,” the woman whispered, her voice hoarse. “Damn you forever after.” Cecilie Devereux sat straight atop a massive shelf so high that if she should ...