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First and foremost, good job with the story. I liked it quite a lot, and the beginning even had a slight air of suspense before you could figure out that ...

It's still pretty good, but I'm noticing the flow breaking up a little bit here and there. Nothing to really worry about, but just be aware of it. Also I ...

Nice job with the story, and Justtrying already pointed out the grammatical errors. I definitely like how you infused some originality into a premise that always seems tired when I ...

I feel like I'm intruding a little by reviewing just because your poem was so heartfelt and solemn. All I can say is that that was really, really deep and ...

I like it. It's short, sweet, and fun to read. The rhythm and rhyme give it a special beat that makes it enjoyable as well. Nice job.

This is the third segment of Blur the Lines, and Part One is nearing it's conclusion. I think there will probably be one more three chapter segment before Part Two ...

Wow. I had to write one of these for a contest once and all of yours just blew it away... each and every one of these are amazing!

I hope you all enjoy this, and anything you say will help me, whether it is good or bad. So don't worry about hurting my feelings... I can handle it. ...

Nice job... with everything. The story itself was excellent, really engaging with a great premise. Your characters are very good as well; through five chapters they develop almost constantly. (I ...

The worst book I ever read was A Wrinkle in Time; it was summer reading one year for school and I just couldn't stand it. I'm not sure there were ...

Whoa... First, I must say, that was excellent. The most important part, the story, had an interesting premise and the character of Renee was remarkably good for a short story. ...

I found it interesting, especially since when one sees aliens in a story they always seem to be destroying something. It's an interesting new perspective that humans are really the ...

I'm not a normally a fan of poetry but this was excellent. You really painted a picture, and I especially loved the verse: Perhaps the highway is scared of night- ...

[Note, this is the first part, please read this before reading any later parts] I would try to explain the plot, but really I haven't figured out a lot of ...

It's definitely worth pursuing, as the idea behind the story seems pretty good. However you do need a lot of practice with the grammar itself, and I found it a ...