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i really really love the plot line! although i did notice some spelling or word choice errors over all it was very nice. I would suggest maybe spending some time ...

I loved it! I think the way it is in written is perfect to get across the ideas you wanted too, and i'm very interested in the love triangle that ...

The girl let out a high-pitched screech as she felt a splash of watter hit her bare back. Pausing in the ankle deep sandy shore, she whipped her body around ...