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Re: Never Your Fairytale
Pleasurable to read and well written, I'd say that you have a good poem here:D I quite enjoyed reading it You were right, it was kinda cliché, but you know ...
Jul 31, 2011 -
Re: For years.
A well written poem this is:D It;s quite enjoyable as well, especially to see that there are people out there that go completely against what is said about some sisters. ...
Jul 31, 2011 -
Re: Living in Sorrow
This sounds a little like something that Bella would say/write/think when Edward left her in New Moon.....just saying. It has its similarities. Besides that, it's a pretty good poem:D Dramatic ...
Jul 31, 2011 -
Re: The Story of You and I
Love is a difficult word sometimes. Sometimes it's over used and sometimes not used enough. You have to be there and witness it for yourself before you can truly tell ...
Jul 28, 2011 -
Re: I want
Interesting poem you have here. I quite liked it:D It really relates to how everyone can feel every now and then. I'm willing to bet that everyone that reads this ...
Jul 28, 2011 -
Re: White flag
I liked the way you compared the fighg of falling in love to a War. I didn't really expect that until it got further into the poem. It really shows ...
Jul 28, 2011 -
Re: The Demon's Heart
Haha; it's kewl:D I'm sorry that it confused you, but it's all gonna make sense later on in the story:D ~C.C.
Jul 28, 2011 -
Re: Fiery Love
This is a fairly good poem:D Of course I've only really recently started writing poetry myself, but in my current best judgement it's good:D Where did you get the idea? ...
Jul 28, 2011 -
Re: Best Friends
It makes me really think about who I have as a best friend. I'm making quite a few changes as I'm getting older and I like how that can really ...
Jul 27, 2011 -
Re: The Best for Last
Where did you get the idea for this poem?? I can't help but wonder because your hair isn't brown....it's more like a dirty blond. Well, is it you and a ...
Jul 27, 2011 -
Re: Battlefield of Love Prologue
This is pretty good, but it seems a bit like Twilight. The Strong Vampire with the fragile girl, divorced parents. I also feel that you could be a bit more ...
Jul 27, 2011 -
Re: The Demon's Heart
Thanks for your comments of constructive critcism:D I do admit that I have some grammer issues that I need to work on, which is one reason that I came here ...
Jul 27, 2011 -
Re: The Demon's Heart
Introduction: Love is hard to find, especially when you're looking for that one person that you wanna be with rather than just someone that you wanna screw around with. Sometimes, ...
Jul 26, 2011 -
Re: Welcome New Members! [2]
Hey :smt003 I'm new here and I'm trying to figure everything out, so cut me some slack if I make a stupid mistakeXD I love to write, obviously. Though my ...
Jul 22, 2011
