Butterfly18

Ha, I color my sketches using Gimp too. I actually did four character portraits that will be part of a fantasy e-book of mine. I'm kind of novice at using ...

Hello, Aquareed. I love witches and withcraft, I have them play a major role in my fantasy series. As for your opening, here are some things I spotted. I lifted ...

Hi, I'm Butterfly. I'm 18. I'm happy to have joined this site and can't wait to post some of my work. I would like to review some people's work on ...

Hello, Gamergirl. First thing I noticed, My vision was blurred , but I noticed I no longer was in a white nothingness. My vision was blurred, is one sentence. I ...

Hello, neonwriter. First of all, you're paragraphs are very clunky and awkward. Whenever a character speaks, or there is a shift in opinion, point of view, meaning, thought etc. it ...

Hello, Deathcurrent. First of all, very intrigued from the moment I read, I’m Victoria Stake and I’m a Naiad, or a water elf in simpler terms. Good stuff. Only thing ...

Hello, I'm new to this site as I see you are. First thing that confused me was this, “You must die, Nate!” “It is the only way!” “Why have you ...