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Oh I didn't realize this was fan fiction. In that case, just disregard my review. I don't generally review fan fiction or read it, I just find it strange. People ...

Hello, Dragonette. When I read you made this the opening to your novel, and changed it to first person, I was taken aback. It's one thing to change opening chapters ...

First of all, I like the premise of the story, as well as the story teller being a horse. Now my thoughts. The prologue is just exposition. If you don't ...

Well, strictly focusing on dialogue, in my honest opinion its a little overdone. Too many exclamation points, too many breaks, and it seemed a bit unnatural at times. Here's my ...

I loved this as an opening. He woke up, wedged between busty blonde triplets. Not the worst place to be. No, defiantly not the worst place to be. Good stuff. ...

Wow. I love the eyes, hair, lips, everything. Good stuff. :)

Wow, I love the eyes. So nicely done. :)

I meant walls. From her window she can see the boundaries of the castle where the gates are drawn open. And I meant flay as in whip. Though I think ...

True, well I'l add the rest of the chapter to this post. Hope you'll come back and read the rest of it and comment. :)

Part One ‘She hears your cries when you are weak, waits until you fall asleep, and wipes the tears from your cheek.’ Hymn of Agathe. First Chapter ~ Dragon skulls ...

Hello, OriginalKommadant. I like the name, Dresden first of all. :) Some of the things I noticed. "HE CANNOT BE KING!" And indignant voice called out that erupted the diplomacy ...

How can you draw roses so good? They're freakin awesome. My roses all suck. They don't even look like roses, more like crumpled pieces of scrap paper. Ha. Anyway, this ...

Wow that phoenix sketch is awesome. I like the wolf too. I actually painted a wolf from neck up, but yeah. That's kind of pointless information. Anyway, I love the ...

That's like the same steps I follow. But I do like so many different layers to get the tones perfect, because I generally do portraits. I suck at drawing full ...

Hello, IsItLove. Just some things I noticed. “Do you understand what has happened Maria, sweetheart, your parents, well, your family was killed in car crash.” the kindness, sorrow, and empathy ...