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I love the dragon's head, but I agree if it had scales or something it'd look so much more like a dragon. But I do like the smoothness of it. ...

Wow I love how you did the hand. Haha. My hands are usually crippled or something hahaha. Not good. And is this based on the new rapunzel movie from disney, ...

Hello, RenGrey. First of all, I don't like the idea of a poll just because it can't really be judged that easily. This is what I noticed immediately, The October ...

Present tense. That's what I'm trying to have a go at. :) Don't think I write it as good as you tho, haha. Anyway, Shinda. Here's my thoughts. Kate breathes ...

Hello, I'm writing a somewhat similar story in the way that it's sci-fi and I have what you might call, super soldiers. I noticed this, Today’s mission is a simple ...

Thanks so much for your comments guys. Very much appreciate them. :) And your very welcome, RenGrey. :)

I did this character portrait for RenGrey . Hope you like it. :)

Hello, Bronk. I'd first like to say, very interesting concept. Now to the writing itself. I feel like your prologue was a bit rushed and an info-dump. You should take ...

Hi, guineapiggirl. First of all, I liked this piece though a few things were a bit, left out, which I think gave this a hollow kind of feeling. We don't ...

This is a very interesting story. The writing wasn't that bad either, just some of your sentences have few too many clauses. I like the names, Hope and Faith. Sounds ...

Well first of all, DragonScourge, I think you're trying to impress us by showing off your smart talk. Haha. I ain't smart nor do I pretend to be, but surprisingly ...

Well I liked this. Like the previous poster said, the dashes were a bit over used.4 I feel like I can relate to the character for some reason even though ...

Funny stuff. If you didn't intend it to be funny, then sorry, but yeah. Numerous things made me laugh. She was going to tell the intruder to go fuck himself. ...

Bryn, you kind of contradict yourself saying, I just feel like it's a little to hollywood to jump straight into action. Seems like you don't know what action is. I ...