BustedFlush

Thanks for comments. I didn't know much about how to write a conversation between two people. Now I know.

I went to go pick up Kelly at the usual place that I we met. Every Friday night she sneaks out and we go to a party. We had made ...

I liked the story. I dont't really know how the mechanics worked into it. Maybe it was about Mark being shot. Like what Mattie said you could have streatched the ...

The 1920's brought many Progressive reforms to the United States. The reforms were a result of industrialization, urbanization, and immigration. Progressivism also brought the temperence movement to t

The light came closer and closer until it was not far from him. Whatever it was it stopped. His first thoughts were to yell for help, but he knew he ...

Wow even though it did have some grammer mistakes I still enjoyed it. I understand though because I make alot of mistakes. I also liked the story because I can ...

Thanks for the advice. I am definitely not going to try that again.

I hope you guys enjoy my work and also my comments. Feel free to say whatever you want about my work. I can only learn from my mistakes.

I went to Costa Rica a year ago and it still is always on my mind. Not for the whole trip just one part which I felt was something special ...