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Has anyone read World War Z? It follows a journalist going around the world after a global battle against zombies. He interviews a wide variety of people. Its pretty in ...

Any Bernard Cornwell or Patrick O'Brian book will be an excellent read

In The Road I found the little boy and his father's relationship to be the only good thing in a world full of murderers and cannibals. The whole time I ...

Its been awhile since I have submitted anything to YWS so I thought I would reintroduce myself. Hopefully I can make up for lost time. :wink: I'm in college now ...

The river moved through the forest like a vein winding through an arm. The colors contrasted each other, the trees being a mixture of greens while the river was a ...

I think an owl would be a good choice.

Americans could not live the same way without the immigrants. We depend on their low wages so we can profit more like we did with slaves. Mexicans are almost like ...

Not really but I was knocked out in the woods while skiing and had to find my way to a trail without any skis. I wrote it quickly I didn't ...

I woke up buried in snow that covered my whole body. My left leg seemed to be broken because when I tried to move I felt a sharp pain in ...

It was a very good story, but you left why the war was being fought.

She was on target on about everything. It would have been nice if you had not rushed the ending.

I was just a sophomore no more than sixteen years old. I was living in a small town named Middleton. It was summer time and I was holding down a ...

1. The Sun also Rises by Hemingway 2. The Hobbit by Tolkien 3. The Teeth of the Tiger by Clancy 4. The Black Tulip by Milt Bearden 5. To Have ...

I prefer using pen. More than once my computer has frozen in the middle of a story.

Thanks for the advice. I did my research now and I definately know what I did wrong. I have written another story kind of like this one. But this time ...