Busheldood

I write because it's what i can do to keep my language and it's my hobbie. I live abroad. And i review because i love to read 24/7, and it's ...

Thanks, I do believe that my weakness is my spelling. I don't get to practice that anymore. Thanks again haha :)

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I think it's a really good story begining. I like the way the caracters play out and the opening of the stody. But you could have enthesised the emotions of ...

The begining was fantastic with the description and rhyme flowing together nicely with a very good choice of vocabulary. But in the end, I got a bit confused the way ...

hiya. I really liked it the way it all linked together. Not revealing too much, yet not too little. It makes you wonder what sort of a girl she really ...

thanks, I'll try and get some help to correct it and send you the corrected version. :)

Thanks guys for the advise. I did make a lot of mistakes, more than i expected . . . but i guess everyone needs a starting point. I'll try and ...

I Loved it! xD actually laughed at the sneeky ending - loved it =D

Wow, I loved it. The sad thing is is that i can relate to that. I love the way you managed to put the poem into a story explaining the ...

I really liked it. I thought it had very good description and the story flowed very nicley. Great job *thumbs up* :)

Cold sweat dripped from my nose, making weary dots on the ground. This wasn't the first time I found myself looking down 15 stories off the ground, as the cold ...

Wow. I think it's a really beautiful story, the way the shortness compliments the personal feelings. It also get's you thinking of your own special ending and 'what would you ...

What a story. I found it very moving, yet puzzling("It hit him with sharp stab"). I like the way it left so many questions in my head, and pulled me ...

Wow! What an amazing story!I love your style of vocabulary, and the plot of the story is capturing from the begining. Great Job, love to read more of your stories. ...