Busheldood

haha, it's like I'm reading about myself haha, fantastic poem, absolutely amazing. I'd like to hear more :D

hiya, I found it really easygoing and calm. It flowed very nicely and had a very sweet ending.I really liked it very much, one to be reading in the spring ...

wow. It really felt like i was there watching this! I loved the way you wrote that, really pulling me into the story. I really liked your descriptions creating the ...

hiya, I really liked it, but was a bit confused further into the poem because it changed it's style and rhythm as it progresses. I think it needs a bit ...

wow, I really liked it even though it was short and I like your style of writing. Although i wouldn't say it was needed to say "Upwards" because it already ...

Thanks lele253isme, I guess I just came up with it whilst daydreaming :P . Thanks for the coments guys, and i agree, I did kind of run out of my ...

hiya, I think it was a really good poem. I like the way it flows, and the topic you chose was one that not many people have the strength to ...

thankx guys, it really meant a lot to me. I'll try and run through it again ;)

Hey, I really liked it. I found it flowed through well and seemed different. There's only one word i'm not familiar with - craggly - what does it mean? haha

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wow, it's very good. But it's very depressing, yet, in the end, uplifting. As in, there could be a happy ending, maybe. haha :)

Fingers twitch Sharp breath in Must stay calm Keep it in. Breathing slows Eyes wander Mind strayes Start to ponder. What happes next? Gotta peek Want to see: Will they ...

Wow... That was a fantastic story! I am actually speechless . . . Simply loved it =P

I really liked it, but the way he/she just gave up puzzles me. If I had been shown a little more about the caracter i guess it would have been ...

i really liked it a lot, especially no.5, keep up the good work, I'd like to hear more! :)