Busheldood

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haha thanx guys :)

thanks. I guess you may be right there Lavvi . . . never thought about it, good call haha ;)

I really liked it. It has a good meaning and could be used for many people in all sorts of different situations. Good Job :)

I liked it, it showed how the rose could be the most beautiful flower, yet cause pain. If you'd have put in a bit more expression in it, it'd really ...

haha, thanks guys. I'll try and do that on my next poem i make. I'm glad you liked it :D

thanks guys! I did try and make it flow better but found it was quite dificult haha :$ thanx for the comments! ;)

wow, I think it was really good. I like the deep meaning you put in it, both humourous and romantic. It's different and that's what i like about it :)

I wrote this whilst going through some hard times . . . and there may be some huge mistakes, but hope you like it ;) I'll never forget how much ...

hiya, I do agree with silentwords , the poem has enough strength to bring out the emphasis in the words. Other than that, I think it was a lovely poem ...

I wrote this poem after seeing someone in school I was really interested. I'd say hello if i could talk the language well enough and if he didn't always seem ...

hiya, I really liked it, but had to read it through a few times before i could get the message. The style of writing is really beutiful and i loved ...

haha, I really liked it. It was quirky and funny, and I liked the theme of the story. Loved it xD

heyy, I found it was very sweet and held a lot of emotion. I liked your choice of words and topic. Very nice :)

heyy, even though it was dark (like everyone had pointed out), I thought it had a lot of depth. And I think that's one thing we writers always are striving ...