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wow, i really liked it. It was really imaginative and full of emotion this 'change' has caused. I liked the way it made you feel like you were lifted and ...

wow, i liked it. Sort of like the end of a fairy tale with the knight in shining armour's different ending. I liked the choice of vocabulary there and the ...

heyy, thanks for the comments, I really appreciate it :)

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wow, i really liked it. Especially the way you repeated the same first part on each line and the way you made it into a short story of running away ...

I have a weird friend Who loves to buy But hates to spend. She went to walk the dog, one day But took the cat instead. She wears bright colourful ...

I liked the differences in the caracters and the plot. But it was too random for me. Found it too cheesy, sorry

yes it does, thanks. It does get a bit off beat further in... I'll think about what changes i can do to improve ;) thanx for the correction

Freaky friday, Almost slightly, Never empty Lovely days Something's coming Almost running, 'Bout to see it Through the haze Mind is clearing As it's nearing, Squint to see it As ...

i read the first few pages then, decide if it sounds likt it's got a good plot or see the author

wow, I really liked it. It held so much truth and honesty. I really like your style of writing, and the topic was chosen well. I just want to say ...

wow, I normally don't read poems without paragraphs (i find them too confusing), but I really liked this. It gave a story and reason, and emotion of help the reader ...

haha, I found it really funny, yet true. I too will never understand why parents don't understand why teens have sudden mood swings (and what they were feeling at the ...

wow, i really liked your description. And the emotion in it filled me with sadness knowing that this does still happen. Good topic to talka botu to open eyes and ...

wow, it really touched me. I found it really romantic and adored the ending. Love to hear more, Good job! :D