Burrow

I would say read the inheritance cycle, one they are a good read, two there is a lot of traveling in it, but it isn't written bad. It would help.

I write sci-fi not because I like to look up at the stars, dream of other planets. I right sci-fi because the ideas are endless. You can create a world ...

@SparkToFlame a mod reviewed it and didn't bump I up, is that good?

I don't really know, would it be ok, if I show you the bad bits and you tell me?

My I rated my story 16+, but it involved, torture, and a some violence, could you maybe check if it needs to be a higher 18+ ? thanks