Bryr

I find it ironic that you speak about not being listened to and then you only get two reviews. Well, three now. That's great. I really liked this... rant. I ...

Oh my GOD!!! that is the funniest thing I ever heard. It should be a featured work. I laughed so hard!!! That was a true story?!?! I'm so sorry!!! But ...

I think its more interesting and subtle if you don't actually come out and mention love, it would be better, in my opinion, if you just alluded to the fact. ...

I don't like the use of the metaphor 'nervous as a soldier about to fight' I think it's overkill. I would use something like 'nervous as a matador about to ...

I would suggest changing came a single movement, fast as a hare. to came a single movement, fast and rare. but that's just a suggestion. :xd:

I really liked this poem. It was soft and mournful. It felt like it was effortless because of the composition style. The phonetic-ness of the thump's both tied it together ...

Grace ran away today but I think it's all right Because it's balmy May She's one to run without delay but never miss a fight Grace ran away today She'll ...