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  • Lyric Poetry Re: I Spy........

    I Spy. A juvinile game of seek and find. Juvinile, yes, but then... let's play a round. Just a test of joy. I spy with my little eye... a boy. ...

    Jul 28, 2010
  • Romantic Novels Re: "Unfortunately... I love you" Chapter 1 (Draft #1)

    That was really interesting. Of course I didhave a few key problems with it. Like some of the grammer was a little off. Another is the speed at which her ...

    Jul 16, 2010
  • Action/Adventure Novels Re: Becoming a Purser Chapter One

    Thanks Miz I noticed that and was trying to fix it. Now I know how.

    Jul 16, 2010
  • Action/Adventure Novels Re: Becoming a Purser Chapter One

    “Ali, Ali come quick!” my sister’s voice rang out behind me. “Sarah don’t you dare ever do that to me again.” I said patting my chest. “Fine whatever, just come ...

    Jul 16, 2010
  • Action/Adventure Novels Re: Becoming a Purser Chapter One

    “Ali, Ali come quick!” my sister’s voice rang out behind me. “Sarah don’t you dare ever do that to me again.” I said patting my chest. “Fine whatever, just come ...

    Jul 16, 2010
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Depression

    All I can really say here is wow. The emotions in this poem are overwhelming. The whole thing really makes you think about whats going on. It is pressing. The ...

    Jul 14, 2010
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Kidnapped

    Personally, I loved it! It was a hooker from the begining. I would love to see this as a novel. Of course I do agree with the errors pointed out ...

    Jul 14, 2010
  • Romantic Novels Re: "Unfortunately... I love you" Chapter 1 (Draft #2)

    That was awesome! It was unique, and cute. My only worry is that it doesn't seem like it will be intense, because the best compnent to a romantic novel is ...

    Jul 12, 2010
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Love?

    It's the first day of school. A new building, new hopes. I walk the hallways. Alone in a sea of children. I follow a crowd of familiar faces, and wind ...

    Jul 12, 2010
  • Fanfiction Novels Re: After the Shadow Children Capter 1

    Actually It is chapter one but I just called it Part One.

    Jul 8, 2010
  • Media Reviews Re: The Best Book Ever Read

    I can't lie here so.......... 1)The I,Q Series by Roland Smith 2)The Gallagher Girls Series by Ally Carter 3)The Giver by Lois Lowery Not necessarily in that order.

    Jul 4, 2010
  • Fanfiction Novels Re: After the Shadow Children Part 2

    My name is Samantha Talbot, great, great granddaughter to George Talbot. I should not exist. I am illegal. Then again my great aunt Jen Talbot shouldn’t have either. Although I ...

    Jul 2, 2010
  • Fanfiction Novels Re: After the Shadow Children Capter 1

    There once was a time of the Third Children. A time when the Government allowed adults to have only two children. This was of course, for fear of world hunger. ...

    Jul 2, 2010
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: That one lunch.

    This is for those of you who thought the kiss was too early. The whole point was for the kiss to be early. They had just met. Their eyes locked ...

    Jun 26, 2010
  • Fanfiction Short Stories Re: The Giver by Lowis Lowry, Epilogue

    First off I absolutely loved The was an amazing book and this was a really good add-on. It could have been a bit better. I agree with peanutgallery007 with the ...

    Jun 21, 2010


If I'm going to burn, it might as well be bright.
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