BrooklynWriter

Kaka, You disapoined me. Some of the mistakes that you pointed out were done on purpose to fit the mood of the story and the girls.

Am I too lost to be saved? This is a lyric from an Evanescence song. Will the pain never end? It’s always there, constantly stabbing my heart like lightning in ...

I do like it but I feel it could be improved. For example, I feel you could have used some similies in this case to help readers identify your hardships ...

I do like it but I feel it could be improved. For example, I feel you could have used some similies in this case to help readers identify your hardships ...

Name: Brooke Johns Age: 14 Height: '5''11 Weight: 102 lbs. Race: English, French, American Eyes: Blue Hair: Black Physique: tall, moderately muscled (due to running and living on what she ...

“Come on girls, pack your bags. We’re going on a vacation!” I awoke with a start as Dad burst into the room I shared with my twin sister Brooke. “Dad,” ...

I see you walk across the street, Unaware of my presence. You wouldn’t care if you were. You left me. You left me alone without a call. Left me without ...

Midnight Moon "I'm not stupid, I know who she is and she's all anyone talks or thinks about." Sabrina nodded. I sighed. "What do you want Sabrina?"

Midnight Moon I woke up in the same leafy spot that I had fallen. What else was there to expect? I may be a vampire but I can't teleport. Especially ...

Lilyana darted from shadow to shadow, concious of who might be watching.. Shadows provided cover, and cover was something that could protect her from them . The humans that would ...

Midnight Moon My barefeet padded across the damp leafy floor. The woods had always calmed me. Only now, something about them unsettle me. Mabey it was that call I'd heard ...

Name:Darius Shine Age:Looks 18 real age 417 Gender:Male Type:Breed Appearance:Short spiked red hair. Black eyes. Usually wears a thin leather jacket over a black T-Shirt and jeans. Personality:Outspok

Name:Midnight Moon Age: Looks- 17 Is-317 Gender: Female Type: Vampire Appearance: Blue tinted long black hair, peircing blue eyes surrounded by full black lashes. Thin and tallish. Usually wears a ...

Hi Just had to say I love these pictures. They show good caftsmanship and even better photagrapy. Grae Job. -Brook

Hola, I am sure you worked hard on these pictures. Why am I sure? Because it shows very clearly in your work. Keep on posting. -Brook