BrooklynWriter

Here's what I do: 1)I find all of my dud beginings 2)I read them all 3)Put them away 4)Lay on my bed and blast music 5)Think about everything that I ...

Granted but the day you get it, you drop it and it gets run over by a car. I wish I was thirteen.

Banned for walking in other people's dreams.

Piper I watched from my bunk as the other orphans got together and talked about the kids who had disappeared and who they thought was next. Some of the younger ...

*Signs in bright red sharpie*

Nothing really new from the review on the first chapther. Please refer back to it.

Hey, This is a very interesting piece. I saw the early signs of a good plot formation. But, I wasn't such a fan of the ending of this chapter, the ...

Name/Child number: Piper #13 gender: female age: 15 description/picture:Piper is tall and skinny. She has long blonde hair that she usually keeps back in a ponytail. She usually wears a ...

In green are the punctuation errors, in red is everything else. The land is falling apart, and Great Mother is calling you. There is only one choice, but You are ...

I don't have any fancy crap to back me up but I have a strong opinion on this. I think it is the absolute worst idea anyone/thing could ever come ...

Hey, I'm in desperate need for points and I know reviewing is a way to get points. I also know that most all of us need reviews to get beter ...

Banned for being a princess.

8/10 A little Cliche.

Granted but now that you can lift weights and such the strain is so great that you tear all of your muscles. I wish there was more time in a ...

Granted but now you have no family. I wish someone would corrupt my wish :points: