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Re: Will You Fly With Me?
These are very good. I love the utilization of colors and subtlety. The font on the peices were exquisite and I do believe you should run with this stupendous show ...
Apr 7, 2011 -
Re: BrooklynWriters NaPo Thread
Day 3 - Poem 3 Derek (A Haiku) Hair in lushious waves, Skin as fine as fresh olives, And a past to cherish.
Apr 7, 2011 -
Re: Extinction DT
I guess anywhere that we can find that isn't infested with pre-historic monsters. ;)
Apr 7, 2011 -
Re: Extinction
Callie Chaos consumed the lobby of the hotel. Everyone was scrambling. Blood still covered the dinosaurs mouth from the poor woman he just gobbled up. All of the other kids ...
Apr 6, 2011 -
Re: Extinction DT
So here's my late Profile. Thanx Teardrop! Name: Callie Dunst Age: 15 History: Callie grew up in a broken home. Growing up, she spent alternating weekends with her parents. She ...
Apr 6, 2011 -
Re: House of Murder
Piper I shook with left over terror. The girls bold act resonated within me. When we all began to speak up I knew that something terrible would happen. Then, when ...
Apr 6, 2011 -
Re: BrooklynWriters NaPo Thread
Day 2 - Poem 2 Land of Magic (the library) Shhhh I smile. What a wonderful silence. Smells, Old paper and mildew. Others cringe, And shrink away. I relax, And ...
Apr 5, 2011 -
Re: Literary Critiques (It's that simple)
Okay, yes this is a plea for opportunities but I have a few specifications. I will review ANYTHING but I have new methods that some people may not agree with. ...
Apr 4, 2011 -
Re: My story.
Still... I am so sorry to hear this. It is devestating. I am proud of you for sharing this story. It was powerful.
Apr 4, 2011 -
Re: Find obese pigeons here.
Okay, your pigeons made me laugh so hard I choked! Brilliant!
Apr 4, 2011 -
Re: Get Out, Don't Leave
I like this a lot. My only issue is: 1)The boy's shadow is a bit awkward. If you could get rid of the white line it would be perfect
Apr 4, 2011 -
Re: :)
Oooooo these are really good. 1)You seem to have ended the arms a bit abrubtly. Also her wings are a bit disproportioned. 2) I think you should have added some ...
Apr 4, 2011 -
Re: Watercolor
Whoa this is seriously good. My nit picks -the triangle with the eye doesn't seem to have a tip. -um -erm -.... I just can't seem to find anything else. ...
Apr 4, 2011 -
Re: What is the Best Book you have read...
One of my favorites is the Giver but it changes all the time.
Apr 4, 2011 -
Re: Books you loved more than the movie...
Of course everyone has read it but I have to say it anyway. Charlott's Web. Also I agree with everyone elses statements with Harry Potter.
Apr 4, 2011