BrooklynWriter

Hey, This is really good. But... because there is alsways a but... this doesn't really fit the timeframe you stuck it in. In Midevil times, girls did not wear such ...

Hey there, These are really good. Truly, I normally see this kind of stuff in manga books. Nice Job.

Twit, Thanks for the link, I enjoyed this. I had a few issues with the beginning of the chapter. It took up a lot of time and, once you came ...

Day 6 - Poem 6 My Mind Dragons and Demons, Confusion and Clouds, Wacky Worlds and Fantasies, Anger, Frustration, And sudden juts of happiness, Watch out! Legendary and Magical Creatures ...

Hey, I really liked this poem. It was real and relatable. Great job guys.

Sorry, I have a lot going on right now and I have to drop out. Good Luck.

That is so true. It's also really reassuring to know that I'm not doing something wrong when I pull out my notebook on the bus/in a resturaunt/ect. or when I ...

Hey, I love the colors, and your style looks great. My only nitpick is that the second one looks more like a dojo master than a knight.

Day 5 - Poem 5 Sisterhood (Sibling Rivalry) "Brat" "Little Snot" Words are thrown. Pushing, Pulling, Hits, And kicks. All shared, All harsh. Years pass... Out for lunch, Smiles, Hugs, ...

Piper I was paralyzed. I was also ashamed. I should be out there helping him. I started to push forward, but felt a hand on my arm, holding me back. ...

Day 4 - Poem 4 The Storm Out my window, I see, thick grey nasty clouds; I hear, dephening thunder; I feel, the thick heaviness in the air; I smell, ...

You can't see me but my mouth is hanging open in shock. That was amazing. *LIKES*

OMG I can't believe I haven't reviewed this yet! I've read it like five times. I looooooove it!

............ (this just so happens to be on the top of my list of awkward Time Wasters)

AAAWWWW Okay, I thought my avvie was cute and innocent, but this, this is adorable! My only tip was if you zoomed in just a tiny, and I mean tiny, ...