BrooklynWriter

Hey, I suck at interpretations so I'm going to dive right in to being nitpickedy. Eep, she has no pupils! It's a little eery and it makes her look empty. ...

Hey, I lurve these! Of course I have to be (da da da da) nitpickedy. But I'm going to stay away from the mistakes that you already pointed out. You ...

Hey, (I'm baack) Very nice. It does look as if she is about to cry. There's a lot of emotion in the eyes which is very important for the message ...

Hey, (I bet you're getting pretty sick of me ;)) Yes, I definitely like the original the best. At first, I was going to say that the eyes needed more ...

Hey there, I like your drawing in general, but I have a few nitpicks. For one, the tail is a little too high. I know that some horses have their ...

Alyssa~ I looked around once again at all the strangers around me. I wasn't scared so much as I was perplexed. I still didn't know what happened when I fell, ...

PEN!!!

Last summer, I was sitting on a computer at the library, and I was looking for a writing site for my age group. And badabangbadaboom here I am.

Allora I looked up from the screen of my laptop and marveled at my privacy. I had been up in my room for a week, living off of a stolen ...

I'LL GIVE YOU 2 COOKIES!!!!

Hey guys, So sorry, under construction will be up soon.

Wow, that was powerful. I love your similism with serpents, evil, and friends gone bad. I also like the hope that is kept throughout the poem. But... Two evil serpents ...

Sure

Name: Allora Mae Age: 16 Appearance: Allora is 5'9" and built leanly. She is skinny but not really curvy. She used to have boring brown hair but she died most ...

This SB is co-administered by Ladyofthedeathroses and myself. "Welcome to the Zete's Institute here you will be tested and schooled on using your powers." You arrive at the Zete's Institute ...