Bromthebard

I thougnt it was really good, keep writing. :elephant:

This is your fellow New Age Inkling, This is really good. Keep working on it, and it will be a great book.

This is your fellow New Age Inkling, Being a band nerd I love it. Needs to be longer though. It also ends abruptly.

This is your fellow New Age Inkling, A good story. I agree with the other post about the words that need fixing. Also, I think you should make the end ...