BrokenWings

Illuminating stars reflect off the wings Of a big ugly worthless old crow, As he soars through the night watching beautiful things That he sees on the ground down below. ...

It is sad how greatly child abuse can affect a person... Anyway Nice Poem...I liked it :) I thought it was cool how you switched the point of view. It ...

This was pretty good I usually find it hard to write about writing...but you did a good job. I actually understood this. (i think) =] I thought the flow was ...

thanks or the review ill try to fix it and yea the "til your legs start to bleed" line is meant metaphorically =]

Walk through the hallways Strain a fake grin And allow them to think you’re content. So they can believe You have something in common At least to some minute extent. ...

thanks =] i edited it...i think

noooooooo jacob black is MINE! stupid renesmee... haha just joking =] This was really great and i really enjoyed it. keep up the great work! :D

I sunk lower in my seat as every single eye in the classroom burned through my sweatshirt. I could feel the blood quickly flowing into my cheeks and the aching ...

I have no heart, I’ve lost my mind I have no feelings deep inside. I hide my face, beneath my hair You can laugh and you can stare. I am ...

thank you very much! and yes the fifth stanza was intentional =]

Dancing flames upon my heart, Quicken, as we grow apart. The fire grows as days go by Like scorching sun in mid July Until it starts to drip and melt. ...

thank you =]

thanks! ill try to fix it as best as i can

haha nice :D i really enjoyed this. I have a friend who had to go through this, except his parents weren't very supportive. You should really continue this because i ...

The human heart is like a bone With time it grows and grows. Until you reach a certain stage In which it stops and slows. The human heart is like ...