BrokenSword

I want to either become a stage manager, a set designer, or a lighting/sound designer. I also want to get married and have children. :D

Wow! This is amazing, I love your writing. It's crisp, refreshing, and I can see everything that is described. I can't find anything to critique. Just this little bit right ...

I agree with meggstriggerman. The storyline is interesting, but the writing is choppy and rough, and there are a few punctuation and grammar errors. Also, you need to describe what ...

Thank you for the kind comments :D At the moment, no, I am not considering making a career in photography, but I am planning on selling stock photography to help ...

I don't know any German...well, apart from "hende hoch" "sprechen sie deutch" and "schnell" which I couldn't very well put in. :wink: :roll: And I don't know how to spell ...

p Sorry I can't be of more help, most of my WWII-era knowledge is bigger weaponry (eg: airplanes, A-bombs, etc.) I did find a page that detailed a bunch of ...

I enjoyed it very much; the ending was a surprise. Good descriptions and dialouge. However, I think you should have made Hilter/the German soldier that Joseph saved speak German; I ...

It sounds sort of like a mystery, or maybe a murder story. Perhaps it is a story of an actor who really does kill the star of the show onstage ...

... are you talking about amputation for medical reasons (eg: gangrene, etc) or amputations being the injury itself (eg: stepping on land mines, although I'm not sure those were widly ...

When I have the computer, I type. When I don't, I use paper and I write in cursive. I don't write in cursive for homework, letters, ect. Only for writing, ...

Yesterday I picked up a Civil War novel called "Widow of the South." It's very good so far.

Thanks. I've heard of gangrene, but I've also heard of explosions, fire and whatnot, so I wasn't sure what was most common (or what was even real).

I. Hate. My English class. First off, my teacher makes countless errors in punctuation and grammer herself, which annoys the heck out of me, and simply stands quietly while the ...

Hi again, Jess, I got most of my information from my favorite history book series called "A History of Us" by Joy Hakim. I read the books like novels, they ...

I've been trying to find common wartime causes of amputation in WWII soldiers, but all I can find are names of people with "leg amputated due to injuries sustained in ...