BrokenSword

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Ooo, I LOVED it! So wonderful! I love your writing style. I sat in the old car, worn out from so many years of running. You might want to word ...

Awake. Vague images, feelings, sounds and emotions dissipate, like a dream escaping conscious memory. His eyes open, and stare blindly into the blackness. Soil. It covers him from head to ...

Art, photography, tech theater, playing the piano and the drums... :D

OOOH! I love it...amazing. I especially liked this: Their expressions were stony beneath the shadows of their helmets. They knew what was coming. Scenes of terror and death and carnage. ...

I think final exams will be easy for me this year. Art=No brainer English=No brainer A/V=No brainer Government= ehh... Geometry *dead* I suck at math. The most effective way to ...

Ack! Thanks, you're right, I didn't realize how many times I had put in "his" in that sentence. I'll fix it. Thanks for your post; I am going to continue ...

CHAPTER 1 Chapter 2 Chapter 3 Chapter 4 Chapter 5 Where is he? Nasser let out an exasperated sigh and shut his eyes, passing a hand over his bronzed face. ...

I have to say, I think your dialogue is amazing. I can easily hear everything your characters say. One thing I thought was strange was the Ms. Sal and Amelia's ...

It's tense, and I like it, but it's also a little too much info at once. I would prefer having her just watching the stranger at that very moment, rather ...

Yeah. I already hear enough of the language during the day at school, I don't want to hear it when I'm relaxing and surfing the web.

I don't write explicit stuff, such as graphic sex or very strong language, but I will put some suggestive tones for some scenes, because I feel they're needed. I used ...

You can either watch CourtTV on TV or you can watch court trials on their website (courttv.com). I watch it all the time. Typically, trials are not that exciting unless ...

He's full of himself. At first I just thought he was kind of just a nerd, but he is really full of it. I really need to stop reading about ...

"And so yeah."