BrokenSword

Chapter 1 *** CHAPTER 2 "Go on. Move along." The three guards pressed closely behind the condemned prisoner, herding him like a pack of dogs into a small clammy chamber. ...

I think sometimes the reason that some people don't want to show their writing to others is because writing to them is like putting their private thoughts and ideas on ...

5/10 To be honest, I'm not sure what a character sheet is, and I can't really tell what the figure is, though it looks like it's from a video game.

I walked down the long hallway with the blue-carpeted walls, populated by friendly, blue-clad nurses who nodded at me and smiled as I walked along. There's a bit of repetition ...

Macs can run every single program a PC can run, if you know what software to get. Yes, Macs do come with Microsoft Word. They are also about one hundred ...

I haven't posted any new pictures in a while, but here's some that I took on a trip to New York City.

Woah! I'd love to see them, but first try to shrink them down. I can't see them properly when they are so large! :S

Hugh Vaughn was contemplating on whether he should enter the ballroom that had been hosted by his sister Rowena. I think this whole sentence is a little too much information ...

I like to put rain in stories simply because I love the rain and the fog...hehe....I don't try to use it constantly though. I like putting it in scenes that ...

So does starting a topic in the literary forum and adding to it also count as "reviews?"

Please see the new topic for chapter 2! :)

cute, but I want the word "big" to flash too, for some reason... hehe :D

But in some ways I think the parents have themselves to blame, I wouldn't leave children as young as that alone in a room, even if they did check up ...

@aeroman: I think everyone thinks of the narrator, if speaking in a first person point of view, is the gender that the reader is. Really, it makes it easier to ...

Thank you for all your tips. I've edited the beginning; you can take a look at it and see what you think. :) Chapter 2 is in progress! I hope ...