BrokenSword

I really liked this. Your writing style is engaging and I was interested in the story from the start. Crowds of grief stricken parents surrounded the car This kind of ...

Done and done! :) I only have one relatively new picture.

Hello again! Your photos are quite nice, and you definitely have an eye. #1: I LOVE it. It has an old-fashioned feel, and the spokes of the ferris wheel draw ...

I really like the first one with the ships. The light is shining through the sails and creates a nice effect. I don't really like the second one. The flash ...

"From the looks of it, it seems that homosexuality was not punishable or illegal at that time (I skimmed through the article)." Yeah, right. Sodomy laws still exist in many ...

Thanks for the comments/suggestions. The 2nd picture from New York is busy, but I kind of wanted it to have that feel. New York is never totally peaceful, and I ...

I usually just force myself to keep writing until I'm done, and then go back later to revise it (heavily.)

Thanks so much!! I knew a lot was missing from this piece or needed to be fixed, I just didn't know what. Thanks again, I really needed those suggestions.

Very interesting. I also plan on publishing short stories at some point, maybe to help make a few extra bucks while I am in college. I don't have enough experience ...

You can get a two-button mouse and still right click. Otherwise, it's ctrl+click (if I remember).

Hi! Welcome to YWS! :)

Prologue A young woman ran along a damp dirt road between the dripping hickories, hard legs pumping evenly, her breath coming in small frosty clouds. Racing the sunrise. One slim ...

Whoops! Sorry bout that :)

Thanks for resizing! :wink: #1: The flower needs to be shifted more into the center, and I would tilt the camera vertically. I like the fringe on the petals and ...

I don't know if you're still looking for help on this, but here's something that might help: From the looks of it, it seems that homosexuality was not punishable or ...