BrokenSword

Thank you all for your compliments! ^_^ Here's a few more pictures, including a self portrait...

Some of my newer photography, and experiments with my new lens. In New Zealand NZ

Interesting plot, but I feel there is not enough information, especially at the end, to hold my attention. Perhaps you could mention or hint what these accidents are? I see ...

This is bad. Four months sounds about right. But 'evil', 'henious,' and 'outrageous?' Come on. I'm currently deployed to a country where the brutal dictator murdered 500,000 of his own ...

What's wrong with focusing too much on dialogue? Conversations and interactions are what makes a story. Well, I've had someone tell me that I needed to cut back in dialogue ...

I've seen worse things. Like this (WARNING: IF YOU HAVE A WEAK STOMACH DO NOT CLICK THE LINK, THIS IS NOT A JOKE). Then again, the world is a cruel ...

I focus too much on dialogue Write a play. You know, I've thought about that, and it's kind of odd that I have never written a play, because as a ...

I actually do not have good grasp on grammar terms at all. I know what a noun is and a verb, I have a hard time remembering what an adjective ...

Well, usually my writing helps me out of my depression. But lately I've been seeing how much I phail at writing compared to the other fantastic works I read and ...

Their eyes were locked. His muscles were tightened, teeth clenched his heart pumping blood through his tense body. His mask lay on the floor, exposing the impossibly twisted, discolored flesh ...

I really liked it, it seemed dark and I am still wondering what sort of affliction the person was suffering from. I enjoyed it. :) However I was slightly confused ...

I'm slightly uncomfortable with the fact that I don't really know what the gender of the person writing the diary is. I'm assuming they're female but it would be nice ...

I'm a metalhead and I prefer to listen to progressive metal, but I also like good hiphop and a small amount of rap. Punk, emoscreamo, and country I hate. One ...

Hey! I have a question that I hope someone has some sort of knowledge in. In a story I am writing, the MC has had his eyes forcibly removed years ...

This is an older topic, but I thought it was interesting. It's hard for me to write when I'm listening to music that has lyrics in it. Otherwise, I start ...