BrokenSkye

I really liked this! I couldn't find anything wrong with it! But i wasn't sure what the beat was so in my head i was guessing that it was somewhere ...

My heart is breaking I don’t dare to breath I can hear it, shattering as it falls, high off of its place so far from the ground. I never thought ...

Okay, first I would like to say that your poem was lovely my sister. But there are things that confused me. Like in your fourth stanza you said Then the ...

StoryWeaver, I do believe that my type of love within this poem WAS very typical. Also that I didn't really take the time to review it and edit it completely ...

Baby, I need to know something, what happened to us? What happened to everything? Everything that I loved about you is starting to become the things I hate, I don’t ...

Okay, first off I would like to say that your main idea and situation of the story is brilliant! But, I would also like to say that there are a ...

Wow, it is a beautiful piece, I can say that much. But there are somethings that I would have to change if it was MY work. Like how in the ...

I loved this poem, and how you compared her to a flower and yourself (or the writer) to a stone. By saying She’s so beautiful, isn’t she? Bright blue eyes ...

Hello! :D And welcome to YWS! My name is Skye, and I can't wait to see some of your work!

I think that the poem was lovely and I loved how flexible it was! But now I'm a little curious on what you were talking about, an old blanket or ...

What You Are, Boy. Together forever, Do you remember that? Cause I do. Its hard to forget, someone like you. Someone who plays the game, but is always last picked. ...

This is an amazing poem. I simply love it. Over all great job.

I left you a rose. It erased my smile, And made me shed a tear. Just the thought of it, Makes me sad. Just the thought that you are no ...

Emotions and words strug together is a poem. And I have read many many poetry books. I love poetry it is my life. And this is one of my first ...

Saying sorry doesn't mean anything to me. Sorry doesn't make the world a better place, to live or to stay. Sorry is just another word. Another word that I don't ...