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BrokenSkye

BrokenSkye

  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Dalton

    I miss you, so much, I can't stand it, every once in a while, I will catch myself thinking about you, I loved you, i loved what we had, but ...

    Jan 27, 2012
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Goodnight Kiss

    I missed you, and I love you so. I saw your face, and the butterflies came. But along with them came fears. And nerves striking my thoughts, doubts coming alive. ...

    Dec 31, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Hope in the Midst of a Barren Season

    Wow, you are an amazing photographer! You can tell that you have a passion for your work. It was absolutely amazing to see someone so young, well as old as ...

    Dec 17, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Life is Hard

    Okay first thing I would like to say is that you did a great job on this poem. Next thing I would like to say is that it didn't really ...

    Dec 17, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: tv in the kitchen

    This poem, I'm not going to lie, kind of scared me. It painted a picture in my head that made me imagen someone boiling their blood than throwing it at ...

    Dec 17, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Remembrance's Home

    I really enjoyed reading this poem. It was different and unique. It had depth and beauty beyond this life. I didn't find a single spelling error, at least when I ...

    Dec 16, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: To the Deaf Firmament

    The first thing I would like to say is that your poem was amazing. It had a lot of rhythm and movement. But there were parts that rhymed then others ...

    Dec 16, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: There Will Never Be An "Us"

    The beat is like the one on "My Black Dahlia" by Hollywood Undead. I love you, you hate me, I can't see. You've blinded me, How dare you? How can ...

    Dec 14, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: My dream trip

    Okay first thing that i would like to say is that I really enjoyed reading this poem and that I found your writing not only unique, but amazingly beautiful. The ...

    Dec 14, 2011
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Dear My Love,

    Dear My Love, I would like to say that my life is getting better, but it doesn't seem that I can. My life, as you already know, is a whirl-wind ...

    Dec 13, 2011
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: The True Story of Cinderella

    First things first, WELCOME TO YWS! Okay, now to get serious. If you look at your work, that was amazing by the way, there are the little number and letter ...

    Dec 12, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Cynthia's Story

    Mommy? Mommy do you hear them? They are back again! Please mommy! Make them go away! Mommy! Mommy help me! I'm bleeding again and it hurts so much! It won't ...

    Dec 12, 2011
  • Romantic Novels Re: Lost Love Chapter 2

    I really love this novel! It is simply amazing. And your writing is beautiful! I don't really read the novels on here because they are too long or they get ...

    Dec 12, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Trixie

    Okay first thing I would like to say is that I loved your last stanza! It was beautifully written! First stanza was okay. It took me a second to find ...

    Dec 12, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: I still want you

    Hey Courtney, You have a lot of errors in this poem. And instead of writing a nice long review like I normally do I'm just going to show your errors ...

    Dec 12, 2011


I was weeping as much for him as her; we do sometimes pity creatures that have none of the feeling either for themselves or others.
— Emily Bronte, Wuthering Heights