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Re: Shape shifters chapter one
I think it is really good you just have to watch some smaller details like here when you say "Not a second later Vejeta jumped out. He had shape shifted ...
Jun 17, 2007 -
Re: Always Dreaming of You
I like it is ineteresting.
Jun 7, 2007 -
Re: Hexachord
It's awesome. Did you by chance get any ideas from Inuyasha?
Jun 7, 2007 -
Re: Your Naruto Life Story Chapter 1
Wow that is awesome I love it. Just you made a few typos.
May 4, 2007 -
Re: chapter 1 to my book {still a draft}
I like it a lot as I have told you through the many discussions in art class.
May 1, 2007 -
Re: Lies and Hope
Oh my god I love it. It is so full of emotion. I love it. You may want to fix this quote though But did I every really care? I ...
Apr 29, 2007 -
Re: Sweet Seduction(chapter 2)
Standing there with those demonic wings she stood. Her short black hair spiked up like last time though this time she had a pair of golden horns in the jumble. ...
Apr 28, 2007 -
Re: Sweet Seduction (chapter 1)
On the empty streets of Goose creek, South Carolina she walked. Past shop front after shop front until she found what she was looking for, the local pub. Not a ...
Apr 23, 2007 -
Re: The Black Paean
This is not garbage at all this is spectacular I love it. I can picture what's going on in my mind and in my opinion is great. Great Job :D
Apr 22, 2007 -
Re: Bottled
OMG I love it you are an amazing writer. *writes self note to pat you on back on monday*
Apr 22, 2007 -
Re: Carpe Diem--Chapter 1
OMG this is amazing Layleun! :D
Apr 21, 2007