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Re: Moon Shadows
Hello! I love the story line you have!! Now for some editing... I could hear twigs snapping from behind me as I ran. You already mentioned in your opening sentence ...
Sep 9, 2010 -
Re: A Rose in Winter: Sample Chapter
Hello!!! I absolutely love the way you write! I could see your book getting published in an instant! However I was a little confused at some points. Is the main ...
Sep 6, 2010 -
Re: To Be Confirmed...
Hello!!! I love this opening! It is very interesting and has a few cliff hangers! Now for the criticism... How exactly did she run into a wall? Was she not ...
Sep 5, 2010 -
Re: Golden Wings Chapter 1
Whoa!!!! slow down there ;) This novel has a lot of potential and i love the plot, but too much happened at once! Before you get into what shes dealing ...
Sep 5, 2010